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TuddersUK


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Posted Wed Feb 3rd, 2010 9:27pm Post subject: Another poem (my first)

Hey all. this is my first post on here, so please be nice.

The Eternal Struggle:

Looking at myself in the mirror.
Don't recognise myself any more.
Eyes look dead and soulless.
Life is such a damned chore.

Spiralling out of control...
The eternal struggle.
Everything fades to darkness...
The eternal struggle.

The blackest pit down there,
Consuming the hollowness in me,
On the edge of madness and hopelessness,
Few ties are left to save me.

Finding it hard to carry on.
People try to talk to me.
But I've become trapped in my own despair,
So distracted I cannot see...

Losing the eternal struggle,
Depression is more than skin deep.
I don't want to pass this on.
My curse is mine to keep...

I hope you people like it. I wrote it when I was at my darkest ebb. It still brings tears to my eyes when I read it.

Depression is my curse...

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Norman P


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Posted Thu Feb 4th, 2010 5:12pm Post subject: Another poem (my first)

TuddersUK said:
Hey all. this is my first post on here, so please be nice.

The Eternal Struggle:

Looking at myself in the mirror.
Don't recognise myself any more.
Eyes look dead and soulless.
Life is such a damned chore.

Spiralling out of control...
The eternal struggle.
Everything fades to darkness...
The eternal struggle.

The blackest pit down there,
Consuming the hollowness in me,
On the edge of madness and hopelessness,
Few ties are left to save me.

Finding it hard to carry on.
People try to talk to me.
But I've become trapped in my own despair,
So distracted I cannot see...

Losing the eternal struggle,
Depression is more than skin deep.
I don't want to pass this on.
My curse is mine to keep...

I hope you people like it. I wrote it when I was at my darkest ebb. It still brings tears to my eyes when I read it.

I like this its a valid way to combat the minds duldrums

No Sweat

To love another person is to see the face of God

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