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tito


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Posted Sat Sep 5th, 2009 12:23pm Post subject: For Nitro! Poetry I should be shot for having the audacity to write

Dearest Nitro. I note recently that you expressed an appreciation for bad poetry and I thought, Hello, that's what I write!

Some poems torn from my very soul!

Dove

He doth fly,
by and by,
Is white, not fright, but white.

He doth flutter,
He is peace!
He doth fly,
Oh, by and by and by.

And then he is gone,
Life expunged and expelled.
He finds himself felled!

Dead. Dead. Deaddeaddead.

He lies dead.
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And for my next.

'Woman'

She burgeons.

She bludgeons.

He lies dead. Dead. Dead. And yet more, dead.
.......................................................................
And finally:

'Music of my soul'

music is my soul,
It flows from my mouth,
Which is in my face,
And is a hole.

My soul sings with music,
To hear a note,
It floats my boat.

I open my mouth and it dribbles forth,
It flows free.

It lands on my knee.

And there lies dead. Dead. And music is dead yet more.

Deaddeaddead.


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Mike Pomery


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Posted Sat Sep 5th, 2009 2:56pm Post subject: For Nitro! Poetry I should be shot for having the audacity to write

Death seems prevalent in your musings.


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tito


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Posted Sat Sep 5th, 2009 3:01pm Post subject: For Nitro! Poetry I should be shot for having the audacity to write

Mike Pomery said:
Death seems prevalent in your musings.

Really? I hoped they would have an uplifting theme. Hmmm. I must pen one called 'Life' or 'perky' something of that elk. I mean ilk.


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tito


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Posted Sat Sep 5th, 2009 3:27pm Post subject: For Nitro! Poetry I should be shot for having the audacity to write

Perky

Perky, I am as I skip and jump,
I pick a flower and have a sniff,
But then I trip over a lump,
And plunge head first over a cliff.

Dead.

No. No, it's not working is it?


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Maxx England


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Posted Sat Sep 5th, 2009 4:54pm Post subject: For Nitro! Poetry I should be shot for having the audacity to write

A male model in a politician's
life
can be his downfall. Norman Scott
was Jeremy
Thorpe's

But it doesn't matter now
since Jeremy's long
since been
a corpse.

The only way is forward. Now where's the bar?

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tito


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Posted Sat Sep 5th, 2009 5:26pm Post subject: For Nitro! Poetry I should be shot for having the audacity to write

A hint of Keats there Maxx?


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Maxx England


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Posted Sat Sep 5th, 2009 5:32pm Post subject: For Nitro! Poetry I should be shot for having the audacity to write

I've been suffering from the keats for a month now, nothing I can do seems to relieve the itching. I don't suppose you even know what a keat is, do you?

The only way is forward. Now where's the bar?

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tito


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Posted Sat Sep 5th, 2009 5:48pm Post subject: For Nitro! Poetry I should be shot for having the audacity to write

Ith a telethcope!


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tito


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Posted Sun Sep 6th, 2009 12:01pm Post subject: For Nitro! Poetry I should be shot for having the audacity to write

Chirpy!

I am the chirpy type,
I irritate all the day,
I burst with happy hype,
And throw my smiles your way.

The misery of the world,
Means nothing to me,
A disaster has unfurled!,
But you'd think that I don't see.

I'm just so sodding cheerful,
All the bloody time,
I never sit and mull,
When it's time to draw the line.

You're suicidal and depressed?,
Well, pull yourself together!,
Why let yourself get this distressed,
When you could be cheery forever?.


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tito


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Posted Sun Sep 6th, 2009 2:59pm Post subject: For Nitro! Poetry I should be shot for having the audacity to write

I have just read a Daily Mail online article on how cheerful people die early because they are prone to underestimate risks and symptoms of illness.

I always knew happy people were flawed somewhere!


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Maxx England


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Posted Sun Sep 6th, 2009 3:33pm Post subject: For Nitro! Poetry I should be shot for having the audacity to write

I spoke to a man whose reply was
blunt

About the singer, I reject, James
Blunt

About how he suicidal depresses me, but the knife was

The only way is forward. Now where's the bar?

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tito


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Posted Sun Sep 6th, 2009 3:40pm Post subject: For Nitro! Poetry I should be shot for having the audacity to write

Blunt? Is it the answer blunt? Is it? Hmmm? Is it?

(Sorry. I don't know what came over me there. I was momentarily, hideously enthusiastic.)


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Maxx England


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Posted Sun Sep 6th, 2009 4:10pm Post subject: For Nitro! Poetry I should be shot for having the audacity to write

As opposed to your normal condition of being enthusiastically hideous.

The only way is forward. Now where's the bar?

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tito


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Posted Sun Sep 6th, 2009 8:42pm Post subject: For Nitro! Poetry I should be shot for having the audacity to write

I am naturally hideous. It requires no effort at all.


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quantumofire


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Posted Mon Sep 7th, 2009 3:14am Post subject: For Nitro! Poetry I should be shot for having the audacity to write

Parasite, parasite, where are you tonight?
No so little now perhaps
Still gorging bloody-bright.

Parasite, parasite, will you ever die?
Oh how you trill in ecstasy
Clamped tight to me for life.

http://quantumofire.blogspot.com/

Breaking contradictions in his mind was, to him, like walking through a winter forest snapping twigs underfoot.

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