the next one and that goes on until there is a good end. i hope i explaned it right (in my poor Englisch).
In a country that shal not be named, there was a house and in that house there was a room and in that room there was a old man.
I am what I am
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fryfan20 |
Posted Wed Apr 16th, 2008 7:14pm Post subject: making a story
it is verry simple, i will write the first line for a story and if you feel like it you write
the next one and that goes on until there is a good end. i hope i explaned it right (in my poor Englisch). In a country that shal not be named, there was a house and in that house there was a room and in that room there was a old man. |
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Britannicus |
Posted Wed Apr 16th, 2008 8:52pm Post subject: making a story
Like many old men, he had a secret that he was determined to take with him to the grave; however, there was one young person that was even more determined to prevent him.
"Your room...it's CLEAN!!!" |
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fryfan20 |
Posted Thu Apr 17th, 2008 10:54am Post subject: making a story
that young man was also in the room, looking down at the old man who was tied to a chair.
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Britannicus |
Posted Thu Apr 17th, 2008 7:56pm Post subject: making a story
The young man's gaze was cold, for the old man was not struggling against his restraints.
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Posted Thu Apr 17th, 2008 8:39pm Post subject: making a story
The old man was too busy thinking whether or not he should ask his captor for a potty or just wet his pants and be done with it.
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karen m |
Posted Thu Apr 17th, 2008 8:54pm Post subject: making a story
he could not bear the thought of further humiliation, swallowed whatever pride he had left and gazed up at his captor...
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Britannicus |
Posted Thu Apr 17th, 2008 9:26pm Post subject: making a story
The young man sniffed loudly, then gave the foot of the chair a swift, hard kick.
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karen m |
Posted Thu Apr 17th, 2008 9:35pm Post subject: making a story
the old man crashed to the floor with a sickening crack as his jaw hit the concrete and he felt the warm surge of blood filling his mouth
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Britannicus |
Posted Thu Apr 17th, 2008 9:44pm Post subject: making a story
He spit the blood out as best he could, and with his worn-down teeth stained red he managed to grin out, "Nicely done."
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karen m |
Posted Thu Apr 17th, 2008 9:59pm Post subject: making a story
he could make out the contours of his captors face, he could sense the rage emanating from the mans very being
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Posted Fri Apr 18th, 2008 1:28am Post subject: making a story
((I feel like we're writing a sequel to the Gun Seller or something...
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Britannicus |
Posted Fri Apr 18th, 2008 2:58am Post subject: making a story
"You're wasting your time, Marcus," the old man muttered.
(( X-D )) "Your room...it's CLEAN!!!" |
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fryfan20 |
Posted Fri Apr 18th, 2008 10:47am Post subject: making a story
just tell my, what i want to know dad shouted Marcus loudly
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Posted Fri Apr 18th, 2008 2:45pm Post subject: making a story
"All right," sighed the old man. "They're in the ceramic jar with kittens. Pantry, top shelf."
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Lexie |
Posted Fri Apr 18th, 2008 11:00pm Post subject: making a story
They aren't, i've already looked there
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