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fryfan20


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Posted Wed Apr 16th, 2008 7:14pm Post subject: making a story
it is verry simple, i will write the first line for a story and if you feel like it you write
the next one and that goes on until there is a good end. i hope i explaned it right (in my poor Englisch).

In a country that shal not be named, there was a house and in that house there was a room and in that room there was a old man.

I am what I am

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Britannicus


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Posted Wed Apr 16th, 2008 8:52pm Post subject: making a story
Like many old men, he had a secret that he was determined to take with him to the grave; however, there was one young person that was even more determined to prevent him.

"Your room...it's CLEAN!!!"
"I prayed to God...and...it happened...but...where's my million dollars and horse!? Damn it!"

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fryfan20


Member

Posted Thu Apr 17th, 2008 10:54am Post subject: making a story
that young man was also in the room, looking down at the old man who was tied to a chair.

I am what I am

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Britannicus


Member

Posted Thu Apr 17th, 2008 7:56pm Post subject: making a story
The young man's gaze was cold, for the old man was not struggling against his restraints.

"Your room...it's CLEAN!!!"
"I prayed to God...and...it happened...but...where's my million dollars and horse!? Damn it!"

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AxmxZ


Moderator

Posted Thu Apr 17th, 2008 8:39pm Post subject: making a story
The old man was too busy thinking whether or not he should ask his captor for a potty or just wet his pants and be done with it.

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karen m


Member

Posted Thu Apr 17th, 2008 8:54pm Post subject: making a story
he could not bear the thought of further humiliation, swallowed whatever pride he had left and gazed up at his captor...

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Britannicus


Member

Posted Thu Apr 17th, 2008 9:26pm Post subject: making a story
The young man sniffed loudly, then gave the foot of the chair a swift, hard kick.

"Your room...it's CLEAN!!!"
"I prayed to God...and...it happened...but...where's my million dollars and horse!? Damn it!"

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karen m


Member

Posted Thu Apr 17th, 2008 9:35pm Post subject: making a story
the old man crashed to the floor with a sickening crack as his jaw hit the concrete and he felt the warm surge of blood filling his mouth

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Britannicus


Member

Posted Thu Apr 17th, 2008 9:44pm Post subject: making a story
He spit the blood out as best he could, and with his worn-down teeth stained red he managed to grin out, "Nicely done."

"Your room...it's CLEAN!!!"
"I prayed to God...and...it happened...but...where's my million dollars and horse!? Damn it!"

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karen m


Member

Posted Thu Apr 17th, 2008 9:59pm Post subject: making a story
he could make out the contours of his captors face, he could sense the rage emanating from the mans very being

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AxmxZ


Moderator

Posted Fri Apr 18th, 2008 1:28am Post subject: making a story
((I feel like we're writing a sequel to the Gun Seller or something... ))

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Britannicus


Member

Posted Fri Apr 18th, 2008 2:58am Post subject: making a story
"You're wasting your time, Marcus," the old man muttered.

(( X-D ))

"Your room...it's CLEAN!!!"
"I prayed to God...and...it happened...but...where's my million dollars and horse!? Damn it!"

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fryfan20


Member

Posted Fri Apr 18th, 2008 10:47am Post subject: making a story
just tell my, what i want to know dad shouted Marcus loudly

I am what I am

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AxmxZ


Moderator

Posted Fri Apr 18th, 2008 2:45pm Post subject: making a story
"All right," sighed the old man. "They're in the ceramic jar with kittens. Pantry, top shelf."

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Lexie


Member

Posted Fri Apr 18th, 2008 11:00pm Post subject: making a story
They aren't, i've already looked there

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