I this that last post was pretty creative
Are all the other posts fiction too?
Not a criticism here, but a suggestion and based only on my own preferences.
Blogs that are thematic or carry on around a specific focus ( fiction, poetry, commentary - on whatever-, etc ) are easier to read than those that are all over the map. For instance, someone starts a blog and comments on politics then throws in their favorite song lyrics, then raves about some new movie...are, to me, slightly incoherent to read. I prefer it when a blog is created, for instance, for personal commentary and all the posts reflect that or, and I'm probably being redundant here, is a place to talk about rock music and only rock music. I hope that makes sense.
There are so many blogs out there that the ones that reflect some general purpose tend to stand out versus the ones that are simply landfills for people's unuttered annoyances in a day ( e.g. "My boss sucks" ).
None of the above applies to anything but my own opinion of course. I don't know the game you referenced earlier, but I do like post. If you continue it I might also like to see the commentators 'fleshed out' a little more ( I didn't quite understand why DeGale was working with a group of experts...). It might be kind of cool if one of them was speaking and Art suddenly broke them off or maybe there was tension between a couple of characters. Stuff like that.
OK, I'm not explaining myself very well so am going to jet X-D Before I do though, I hope you will be encouraged to keep writing