So is my blood
Let it flow from me in lifes endless flood
Colour my landscape but leave me behind
Let me escape from my fragmented mind
Pain.....
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SidewalkProphet |
Posted Wed Feb 20th, 2008 10:57pm Post subject: Pain.....
Roses are Red
So is my blood Let it flow from me in lifes endless flood Colour my landscape but leave me behind Let me escape from my fragmented mind |
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Nele |
Posted Wed Feb 27th, 2008 2:12am Post subject: Pain.....
wow! Amazing poem. If it reflects your feelings, I'm truly sorry.
However, this is, I believe, the only depression poem I like (normally it's just a load of unmetrical self-pitying junk). This one is really surprising. When I read roses are red, I just thought, bad love poem. But you turned it arround, amazing! Sorry, I'm not able to write a reaction on an emotional level, I don't view art that way. It's either good or bad. Your's is good. |
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SidewalkProphet |
Posted Mon Mar 17th, 2008 10:42pm Post subject: Pain.....
Wow thank you, it was written during an emotional low from which I have risen. I appreciate your words greatly.
SP. x |
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