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susanstewart1


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Posted Wed Jun 10th, 2009 2:46am Post subject: Poetry to vomit to!
I wrote this when I loved a man who was not only 27 years my seinor but married,
I know I know but I was 19 and have never loved since,



George 3
Everyday is walking through a tunnel of darkness
No light can be found,
No words or conversation
seem tactful or profound.

A life of empty persuits, no meaning,
reason or rhyme,
All I want is to lie with him
and make him truly mine.

But alas he loves another,
And proudly states "she's my soul mate"
My only flame left burning
Has burned me at this stake.

I'll never rest my body in his arms so strong,
My heart is truly broken
For with him I don't belong.

"An original idea. That can't be too hard. The library must be full of them."
Stephen Fry

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Nitro


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Posted Wed Jun 10th, 2009 3:45am Post subject: Poetry to vomit to!
I think lots of folks write things when they're young that later they find cringe-worthy. And most not brave enough, unlike yourself, to let anyone see it

Really? Wow.

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Rosie Horne


Member

Posted Wed Jun 10th, 2009 2:27pm Post subject: Poetry to vomit to!
I wish I was like you....I'm not one of the ones who shows people emotional poems or songs I write to people.

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tito


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Posted Mon Jul 13th, 2009 10:32pm Post subject: Poetry to vomit to!
I wrote this when I loved a man who was not only 27 years my seinor but married,
I know I know but I was 19 and have never loved since,



George 3
Everyday is walking through a tunnel of darkness
No light can be found,
No words or conversation
seem tactful or profound.

A life of empty persuits, no meaning,
reason or rhyme,
All I want is to lie with him
and make him truly mine.

But alas he loves another,
And proudly states "she's my soul mate"
My only flame left burning
Has burned me at this stake.

I'll never rest my body in his arms so strong,
My heart is truly broken
For with him I don't belong.


I know this isn't strictly a poem, in fact I don't know what it you would call it, but when someone said it to me, via www, I did want to vomit. And I quote,

'Hey! Throw out some love and aw! You just watch it bounce right back at ya!'.

God forgive me but I ceased communications with this person permanently. I was terrified of what was coming next.

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Nitro


Member

Posted Tue Jul 14th, 2009 2:45am Post subject: Poetry to vomit to!


'Hey! Throw out some love and aw! You just watch it bounce right back at ya!'.

God forgive me but I ceased communications with this person permanently. I was terrified of what was coming next.

ROFLMAO!!!

Guess you wouldn't like to 'teach the world to sing..in perfect harmony...' either huh? X-D

Really? Wow.

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tito


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Posted Tue Jul 14th, 2009 1:36pm Post subject: Poetry to vomit to!


'Hey! Throw out some love and aw! You just watch it bounce right back at ya!'.

God forgive me but I ceased communications with this person permanently. I was terrified of what was coming next.

ROFLMAO!!!

Guess you wouldn't like to 'teach the world to sing..in perfect harmony...' either huh? X-D

It's fair to say 'no'.

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