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Puppaz


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Posted Mon Oct 27th, 2008 9:15pm Post subject: Twitter combi-poem
A random little poem that monochromeprincess and I wrote line by line, with her starting. It should be pointed out that her poetic ability far outweighs my own, so it sounds a bit crappy because of me Very random, but quite fun, I'm just putting it here for posterity

The autumn leaves wilt and darken as the shadows fall
They twist and wrap around me like a winter shawl
Lying out before me a path lit by red lamplight
Your fading footsteps distant as the shadows take delight
Now my own movements are weary, I am falling after you
I try to call out, but my voice falters, the fear is bleeding through
And my heart is breaking; yet all is dark, the wind whistles in my face
Its voice seems to call out my name, its freezing touches serve as a reminder of your embrace
And yet there is nothing here: my wolf eyes look up to the moon shining white
And it looks back down in all its grand purity, mocking my fear, amused by this plight
The leaves have fallen now, sad and sullen to the ground
And all is still around me, yet there lies something nearby, some...thing still unfound
Despite the all consuming blackness that thing is all I see
The eyes, the face, the tear-soaked flesh. This hideous thing... this thing is me

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gadgetgirl


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Posted Mon Oct 27th, 2008 10:53pm Post subject: Twitter combi-poem
I really like it - especially the way it changes towards the end.

That would be me.

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monochromeprincess


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Posted Tue Oct 28th, 2008 8:40pm Post subject: Twitter combi-poem
I shall not stand for such self-depracation Puppaz! Here's to much twittering and poetising (and philosophising!) for both of us....

mp xxxx

@dreamingshadow

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Puppaz


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Posted Tue Oct 28th, 2008 8:43pm Post subject: Twitter combi-poem
You'd better sit down then

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wooden_elf


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Posted Tue Oct 28th, 2008 8:57pm Post subject: Twitter combi-poem
*applauds you both*

That was very beautiful!! *hugs you both*

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IdeaCollector


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Posted Wed Oct 29th, 2008 5:01am Post subject: Twitter combi-poem
Excellent job you guys.

I used to be EternalStudent on these forums until the switch over. So don't get excited..I'm not someone new and exciting. I'm just me :P

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