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the teenage philosopher


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Posted Sat Aug 14th, 2010 9:58pm Post subject: when the war is over/ dirty old town

WHEN THE WAR IS OVER
when the last shot is fired
and when the war is no longer romantic
and when the beauty of death has withered
with experiance and age

when the cries of men no longer fuel
the passions of battles
when the crops can no longer grow
and seeds can no longer be sewn

when the rising sun brings the releif of surviving the night
when the bleeding child who once played the fiddle on the corner's
last lament has faded into the silence and darkness of the night

then the war is over

DIRTY OLD TOWN
drifting, aching clouds of love and regret
as harsh and old as the factory
sirens screech across old soot covered towns

the empty smell of youthfull vigour
cold rooms and icy loneliness
half remembered in quilt covered dreams

framed with goosebump smiles of cloud tossed shades
memories are slow
fading smokey streets and fading needs

no longer urgent
no longer ardent
but needed none the less

\"down with the kids\" is the paramillitary branch of help the aged

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misprofessioned


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Posted Sun Aug 15th, 2010 1:59pm Post subject: when the war is over/ dirty old town

love it.. especially the one on war!! really good

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the teenage philosopher


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Posted Wed Aug 18th, 2010 12:41am Post subject: when the war is over/ dirty old town

thank you

\"down with the kids\" is the paramillitary branch of help the aged

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Nitro


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Posted Fri Sep 3rd, 2010 1:41pm Post subject: when the war is over/ dirty old town

Don't stop writing!!

Really? Wow.

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Ellis.George


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Posted Sat Sep 4th, 2010 8:22pm Post subject: when the war is over/ dirty old town

They were both beautiful. I want to hear more

Squeek. Miaw. Woof. Rawr.

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TheDuchess24


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Posted Sat Sep 4th, 2010 10:46pm Post subject: when the war is over/ dirty old town

Very impressed.

A 17 year old girl from Hampshire with an unhealthy obsession for many things, including the irritatingly unavailable Mr Fry. Will most certainly attempt to kidnap him in the future and force him to marry me.

I apologize in advance, Stephen. ;)

'I am all in a sea of wonders. I doubt; I fear; I think strange things, which I dare not confess to my own soul.' - Bram Stoker.

My blog can be found here!

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